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Author Topic : Some Critique please. (opinion good or bad) 
rids

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City: Oxford
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Member Since: Jun 13, 2012
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Views : 1570  Jan 28, 2013 11:15am

im just after some other peoples opinoin on the pics im new to this and just want opinions so i can in prove or carry on doing the good things and bin the bad.


8Z9A2646-Edit-2.jpg by rids75, on Flickr


8Z9A3459-Edit.jpg by rids75, on Flickr


garry2.jpg by rids75, on Flickr

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Bravura

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City: Swindon
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The first has some patches of what look like greasy skin on the nose and forehead, and the pose doesn't look entirely comfortable. Good use of depth of field.
The other two are far better, I like the use of negative space, especially in the third picture where the model's looking into it; it's perhaps slightly overdone in the portrait, but that's a question of taste. The lighting is good in both cases. There are some blothches in the space on the portrait which you could eliminate.

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Vkumar

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City: Edgware, London
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I agree with Bravura for the first image. It does need some touching.
Second and third are much better.
For the second one, I do like it but would have preferred to see some hair light to bring the model out from the background.
Third one is the best, however, may be we can live with slightly less negative space.



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XxkikiXx

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City: Manchester
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I'm not expert, but I really like the second one. The third is my favourite!

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