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Dezstruction

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Views : 1615  Jul 19, 2013 7:18am

This is only my second shoot since turning 18 and I am still a bit nervous with the camera, slowly getting there though.
These were the results so far but I am not sure which to use on my portfolio.
Help please










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Raven_Nyx

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RE: Castaway... Jul 19, 2013 7:19am

Pretty lass. And for a newbie you are good

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 Diceman199

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RE: Castaway... Jul 19, 2013 7:31am

You do have a nice look to you. What I would say is you need to relax, that fourth photo where you are smiling is so much better than the others.

You have the looks you just need to relax and develop your confidence

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martyn

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RE: Castaway... Jul 19, 2013 7:48am

there are 3 that say to me "portfolio" ... 5



7



and 8



and it is often tougher if it is a member of the family behind the camera

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RE: Castaway... Jul 19, 2013 8:07am

Numbers 3,6, & 8 for me, although you are just starting out, they show a lot of potential. Do more

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Seductress

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RE: Castaway... Jul 19, 2013 9:31am

I have to say I think 3, 6 & 8 are the ones that draw me most. For what its worth

All very beautiful images but those 3 have a haunting quality to them - which is actually a good thing - well to me!

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RE: Castaway... Jul 19, 2013 9:32am

All good for but especially 3,4,6 & 8.

Well done! Keep up the good work.

Don't worry, you will become more confident and relaxed the more you are in front of a camera.

Big hug,

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RE: Castaway... Jul 19, 2013 1:32pm

Clearly I march to the beat of a different drum as number 2 is my favourite.

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Dezstruction

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RE: Castaway... Aug 1, 2013 6:07pm

Rather than bump the other thread I had in Critiques I thought I would share some of my last two shoots with you, to see if I am improving.
I know I have to work on facial expressions more..




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q6photos

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RE: Castaway... Aug 1, 2013 7:42pm

Hi there I reckon you are a lovely young lady and the best way to improve is to try a different tack

Have a shoot where you forget to try to look great, just pose ass you want, and rely totally on photographer to make great photos, that is his job.

Chat with photographer about anything except the photograhy, and he will get you looking even better than in these images, Because you will relax and smile, I think you with a real smile will be an image for Circles Pic of the Year , not just the day.

Keep on getting better, I'll be watching from Western Australia.

Cheers
Derek

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RE: Castaway... Aug 2, 2013 1:14pm

2 & 7 for me. The more time you spend in front of a camera, the easier it will become and a more natural thing for you to do ......


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