well, its been a long time since i posted here however apologies if some of you have already seen this elsewhere from me in the last week but for those who havent id be interested on your opinion on these 2 new pics good or bad i dont mind i'm tough skinned

and this one

2nd Image is beautiful
not too keen on the first but both are still good
CaraJane

I like the first one...

The first image looks as though you started with your back to the camera and have turned your upper body to the right then turned your head to the right which gives the impression of a larger body then you actually have, your body should have been turned to the right a little more, the hand looks as though tou are scratching your forehead with your fingernail.

The second image I feel could have been more central and i would have cropped the image at the top of the t-shirt giving the impression of bare shoulders which I always love. I do like the catch lights in the eyes and the glossy lips but what about the SKIN TONES !

#1 is my favourite by a country mile. Model has nice shape, up around her shoulders/neck could maybe have withstood some smoothing but the general lines of her body, expression etc for me are great.

First one - just a personal thing, but I'm not overwhelmed by the expression. Sorry.

Second one - I'm in love. A natural-looking and beautiful pic. Just one teensy-weensy thing - I wonder how it would look if one pair of catchlights were removed from the eyes.

#1 At first sight the pose looks a little awkward but I've grown to like the 'tension' this gives to the photo
#2 Love the crop and soft tones contrasting with the black top. My only change would be to the skin toning but a very very nice portrait

Firstly, both are good pictures. If I'm to be critical, I think your hand position on the first picture that shows your knuckle coming out of your arm is a slight distraction, but easily corrected in photoshop.
In the second picture I would tidy up the side of your hair slightly, and strengthen the eyes with a little more make up. Again, this could be easily achieved post production. These are minor points, and they are 2 nice shots.

Hope that wasn't too critical!!

thanks everyone for the comments